Thursday, January 29, 2009

Poverty vs. Wealth


Something that I found interesting was the in-class free write. We were asked to reflect on a sentence on page 24: "...and what effect poverty has on the mind; and what effect wealth has on the mind." I found it hard to write about this sentence when asked to do so but, I had highlighted it as I was reading. I thought it would be important but couldn't figure out the meaning behind it. As I was thinking about it in class, all I could come up with was that it was somehow related to being locked in versus being locked out. I'm not exactly sure what made me think of this but I wrote that being locked in symbolized wealth while being locked out symbolized poverty. While the poverty side seemed easy to relate to Woolf I found it harder to make a connection with the wealthy side. Poverty, Woolf would say, had negative effects on the mind for women because it did not allow them the resources to think clearly and without interruptions. The poverty of women prevented them from having a room of their own. They were seen as caretakers so they were constantly being interrupted by one of their many children. I think being on the other extreme(wealth) could also be bad but was not sure how to connect that to Woolf. Any ideas? Is it just that because men had money they thought of themselves as superior and, therefore, thought it acceptable to keep women in a submissive role? This could have negative effects on their mind as this way of thinking could take over their life. What other ways would this effect the mind?

Wednesday, January 21, 2009

writing metaphor

A group of friends from all over the country want to take a long trip somewhere all together. When they decide this they have to answer a few questions. They need to figure out where to start- at whose house should they meet? Where are they going to go? How are they going to get there- what mode of transportation will best suit their needs? There are many things they must think through before they are able to embark on the journey. Writing is taking a long roadtrip. In order to start the journey it is imperative to have some kind of plan. But, at the same time, know that these plans may change. As you begin the trip you may realize you would rather go somewhere else. A totally new destination and way of getting there may arise- go with it and see how satisfied you are. No matter where you decide to go, the time it takes to reach your destination depends on who is driving. If I was the one driving, our trip would take a long time. I usually drive the speed limit but occasionally I speed up. Often times I drive for a long time and realize I do not know where I am going. When this happens it is necessary to pull over and walk around to strecth. When I get lost/do not know where I am headed I have to backtrack a bit until I find somewhere I am more familiar with or stop and ask for directions. Along the trip things may go wrong. The road may have pot holes that make your trip bumpy. It will not be as smooth as you had hoped, you may get a flat tire but that can be fixed. It may take the whole group of friends or one person. But, all the planning and time you put into it will pay off- you will have the time of your life. Hopefully you will be happy with the end- product and end somewhere like this.
I think the biggest problem for me is choosing the destination- getting started. What are some good ways to get started? Do people find it beneficial to make an outline?